Ignoring the lolicon, shotacon, noncon, bestiality, and all of the grammatical errors, the plot itself also makes no sense. Why wouldn't Raven use her magic on Beast Boy as soon as he moved on to Starfire, assuming he was too strong to fight back against before? Why did Starfire just stand there instead of, oh I don't know, using her lasers to defend Raven?
Ignoring the lolicon, shotacon, noncon, bestiality, and all of the grammatical errors, the plot itself also makes no sense. Why wouldn't Raven use her magic on Beast Boy as soon as he moved on to Starfire, assuming he was too strong to fight back against before? Why did Starfire just stand there instead of, oh I don't know, using her lasers to defend Raven?