VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

dontcarewhateverno сказал(а):

No. She's not close. She's decent for a porn game writer... well, given the low bar, she's very good for a porn game writer. But that's it.

What you're not getting is the path branching. Edgar Alan Poe didn't need to give the option to: Quote the raven; cook the raven; bat eyes at the raven; try to date the raven and see where it takes you. Turns out the raven's got a couple of friends and you started cheating with the sparrow. Or you can choose to date the raven exclusively and take one of several paths for kinky raven content. But it turns out you can control the raven too and she's got a nest of eggs at home to take care of. Sometimes the magpie stops by and the raven can be mean, nice or sexy to it. But that completely changes the story because the magpie is friends with your goose and your goose took a gander of that hot bird orgy involving seven different pelicans and five optional mating dances, all with their own unique outcomes. But that's just the beginning of the first 6 pages, with so many branching pathways that Edgar Alan Poe says "fuck it" and goes on vacation for a few weeks before the poets at the Absinthe bar start grumbling "no good, lazy, milking gothic horror writer. The writing is shit now, too. WTF with all the bird sex?"

It's not the most amazing writing, but the complexity involved in branching paths and the problems that could entail in cohesive narrative are incomparable to most other lone-writer vns & definitely much more complex than any choose-your-own-adventure novel out there.

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Nemo67 сказал(а):

We are almost halfway through the game, it would be nice if Ivy...

I know, it's kinda crazy idea, but bear with me... If Ivy FINALLY GOT FUCKING PENETRATED BY LITERALLY ANYONE IN THIS GOD FORSAKEN PORN GAME.

A-N-Y-O-N-E

She's literally the only main cast female who didn't do that yet, only lesbian scenes.

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soprano31 сказал(а):

if you want rough and dominant sex,never take ian,
he's a wimp in this area,get axel or mike.
they can really dominate lena and give her an orgasm that will take her to seventh heaven
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Hongfire Survivor сказал(а):

I gotta say, well fucking done.

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soprano31 сказал(а):

if you want rough and dominant sex,never take ian,
he's a wimp in this area,get axel or mike.
they can really dominate lena and give her an orgasm that will take her to seventh heaven
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Tengen_Uzui сказал(а):

Anybody know who won the pole for Lena's lust outfit?

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Tengen_Uzui сказал(а):

Anybody know who won the pole for Lena's lust outfit?

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Tengen_Uzui сказал(а):

Anybody know who won the pole for Lena's lust outfit?

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monk_56 сказал(а):

Ian's scenes will never be that hot. He is too much of a manlett. Average dude put in the plot to be cucked by the better looking men and/or to show how an average dude with underdog qualities could get the hot-chick by not being as huge of a dick-head as them, being charismatic, or becoming successful. Underdog story is cool- but it isn't very aesthetically pleasing.

If I had to pick a pairing he looked best with it was probably Cherry or Holly.

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monk_56 сказал(а):

Ian's scenes will never be that hot. He is too much of a manlett. Average dude put in the plot to be cucked by the better looking men and/or to show how an average dude with underdog qualities could get the hot-chick by not being as huge of a dick-head as them, being charismatic, or becoming successful. Underdog story is cool- but it isn't very aesthetically pleasing.

If I had to pick a pairing he looked best with it was probably Cherry or Holly.

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Antera сказал(а):

Well if he works on himself a bit and changes his style, He can go from Average to Cool dude

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JohnnyKiss сказал(а):

The issue with Ian when it comes to "rough sex" is his appearance. Even if he can have it with Lena, like the others have mentioned, he lacks the physique for it. I mentioned few months ago that Ian is designed to be "the most average man alive" to encompass the broadest range of the player base.

He is the average height (5' 8), he is white, 20-something, has brown hair, neither skinny nor fat nor muscular; and while you can play the game to make him a "Chad" he still lacks the appearance that people usually associate with Chads. That's why Axel, Mike and Jeremy are more appropriate since they are either muscular or muscular and tall.

It would be nice if Ian could eventually become more muscular if you make him train enough but that would mean every sex scene he is in would need to be drawn twice (one with regular Ian and one with muscular Ian) and I think we all know that means just more work for the Dev.

Then again, GGGB had Ashley change her appearance a lot throughout the game so I wouldn't count this opportunity out. I would definitely like to see it implemented in the game. Would definitely raise my interest in Ian's scenes by a lot.

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JohnnyKiss сказал(а):

The issue with Ian when it comes to "rough sex" is his appearance. Even if he can have it with Lena, like the others have mentioned, he lacks the physique for it. I mentioned few months ago that Ian is designed to be "the most average man alive" to encompass the broadest range of the player base.

He is the average height (5' 8), he is white, 20-something, has brown hair, neither skinny nor fat nor muscular; and while you can play the game to make him a "Chad" he still lacks the appearance that people usually associate with Chads. That's why Axel, Mike and Jeremy are more appropriate since they are either muscular or muscular and tall.

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bauman сказал(а):

IMO, it's the main thing that handicaps ORS from being more popular than it is. Lena & Ian are too average, too vanilla, and too close to real life. Especially Ian. Players who like to self-insert as the protagonists in smut games love characters that are 'bigger than life.' Swap Ian with Axel or Jeremy and maybe Lena with Cindy as the main characters, and I bet this game takes off to the next level. You can probably argue that even the fucking bouncer at the club, with some bare-bones character development, would be a better pick than Ian as the main character in a porn game in the eyes of the average smut connoisseur.

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Alleykatt сказал(а):

Completely disagree. Some of us don't want to be assholes like Axel or Jeremy. I would never ever identify with that type of guy.

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